Sunday, 3 July 2016

Althemore


Some words unspoken, 
Some feelings unexpressed,
Brought some depth, that no knowledge would have unfold.

Those tears lost in rains,
And the laughters insane, 
Built an intensity; no trials, could withold. 

One strange path travelled, 
Few confusions having powers to prone, 
Gifted some clarity, no solace could have consoled. 

The dark night, that felt never-ending,
That promise broken for reasons unknown,
Gave me a direction; no compass, would have taken me abode.

Green with it's eternal life force,
Earth's nourishment since times undisclosed,
Fed my needs, that no soul could afford.

A song fell on ears in despair,
The poem that ran on paper from nowhere,
Grew a strength, no defeat, could ever erode.

Innumerable dreams, staying forever alive, 
Accidents messaging, there was always an outline.
Makes me believe in the purpose; no achievements, could have bestowed.

Few questions unanswered, 
An intense longing for things not known. 
Led me beyond; no training, could took me to board.

Those weren't just moments, 
but so much more at the core. 
This awareness gets me believe, in the creator; ALTHEMORE. 
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26 comments:

  1. mukta3 July 2016 at 02:29

    Love "the poem that ran on the paper"...part so much : ) well written Naina

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 02:37

      Thankyou Mukta.
      It's a writer's delight to get to know, someone connected to the words in the writing.
      Love,
      Naina

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    2. Unknown3 July 2016 at 03:40

      awesome lines......indeed

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    3. Unknown3 July 2016 at 03:43

      Thankyou.
      Good to know, that I get to connect to people through my blog.
      Love you loads,
      Naina

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  2. Rajesh Shetty3 July 2016 at 02:33

    You have gone deeper in this poem and attaining unassailable heights as a Poet!

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 02:48

      Captain...!
      That means a lot to me.
      I am obliged.
      Thankyou..

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  3. Unknown3 July 2016 at 03:33

    Hmm..

    Tears Lost in The Rain...

    Nice.... a Song on This....canb

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 03:37

      Jiju.. A comment from you.
      I am so happy.
      Thankyou so so.. much.
      I am so happy, to know you connected.
      Love you loads,
      Naina

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  4. Unknown3 July 2016 at 04:18

    Hi Naina ,
    Read your poem ...expressed beautifully perhaps a life shared in few intensely/ intently chosen words. I read poems often and must say you concluded so well "This awareness gets me believe, in the creator; ALTHEMORE."

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 04:22

      Dearest Sanjay!
      It's such an amazing feeling to connect to someone whom you don't know through the writings.
      Thankyou so.. much to take time out to visit, read and reply to the blog post.
      Hope to continue to connect through this amazing medium.
      Love,
      Naina

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  5. Unknown3 July 2016 at 06:50

    Very nicely expressed Naina! What a way to beat the nihilistic urge after bad times!

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 06:58

      Ha..ha.. Sahil.. you felt so.
      Right now.. I am truly not feeling those being the bad times. Definitely, then did feel tough.

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  6. Asavari3 July 2016 at 06:56

    This is so beautiful,intense and powerful! The words as well as the experience behind it!! May your life p be enriched with all such beautiful moments!!!❤����

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 06:59

      Hi Asavari.
      So happy to know, you liked the poem.
      Thankyou so..so.. much for wondersful wishes and for such a lovely comment.
      Love you loads,
      Naina

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  7. kirangul3 July 2016 at 07:11

    Your writing is beautiful Naina.
    It touched my heart.

    Looks like your writing also dances :)
    Yes, it's all a flow..
    Sometimes easy, sometimes troubled
    Waiting
    Watching
    Allowing
    The music of life
    To fill our senses
    Meeting
    The song that is yet to be sung
    That crashes at the shores
    Of the heart
    Not unlike
    The waves on a windy night
    That arrive quietly
    On the shores of Anjuna
    In Goa.
    :)

    Keep writing dear..
    Kiran

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 07:23

      Dearest Kiran,
      That was overwhelming.
      Your reply touched me in turn.
      Woww.. !
      You struck a chord with your words.
      Your writings are as beautiful as your listening is.
      I have experienced you once.
      I attended one of your listening circles at Pagdandi. I think you wouldn't have recognised me.
      And..I have heard a lot from a friend, Monica Mehta of you.
      To get such a response from you on the blog post.. I feel like patting and treating myself today.. :)
      Hope to connect in ways possible and definitely through this beautiful medium.
      Love,
      Naina

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  8. Unknown3 July 2016 at 09:07

    Beautiful Naina! It took me to an unknown realm - beyond words, beyond experience. That which just is!!

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 09:11

      Thankyou so..so.. much Monica.
      I feel so complete listening to experiences like this from the readers.
      And.. moreover from someone so..so..special as you.
      Love you loads..
      Naina

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  9. madhumitha kumar3 July 2016 at 09:39

    Nice one naina

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 09:50

      Hi Madhumita. So nice to hear from you.
      Thankyou so much dear.

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  10. harini3 July 2016 at 10:24

    Deep and a beautiful a willingness to be open to and trust life as it unfolds :) thank you for sharing .

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    1. Unknown3 July 2016 at 10:26

      Hi Harini!

      Feeling so happy to receive your comment to the blog.

      Thankyou so much to share your thoughts here.

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  11. Unknown4 July 2016 at 07:12

    Had tears in my eyes while reading these lines Naina.

    'The dark night, that felt never-ending,
    That promise broken for reasons unknown,
    Gave me a direction; no compass, would have taken me abode'

    God bless you. You have a gifted ability to give words to feelings and emotions. Amazingly connecting. Thanks so much.

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  12. Unknown4 July 2016 at 07:23

    Dearest Sudeep,

    I have goosebumps reading your words.
    Thankyou so much for such beautiful words.

    I certainly have a huge impact of this particular post on my ownself.

    Reading and Experiencing, the impact on the readers has been an another experience altogether for me.

    Thankyou so..so..much.

    Love you loads..

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  13. Sheetal8 July 2016 at 21:13

    Kya baat Naina !!!!
    Lovely Poem.

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    1. Unknown10 July 2016 at 02:46

      Thankyou Sheetal.
      Good to see your comment on the blog.

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